Jessica Rabbit

Nice, Max. I think you could lower and narrow her nose a bit. Jessica is about as pinup as it gets so you really need to exemplify those thin features. I think you could have pushed her proportions a bit more and rounded the top of the shoulder a bit more. The eye effect is a nice focal point but I think you needed to put the cast shadow of the arm onto the torso from where the light seems to be coming from. If you want to be exact, try and think about where your light source is in space, and imagine a line drawn straight down to the ground from it. If you drew light rays past the arm and onto the torso, that will tell you how large the cast shadow will be, you can then draw a line from the point where it hits the torso, back to the straight line drawn down from the light source, that will give you the proper angle of the cast shadow and show you just how much of the form will show.